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Writing Task Two
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Please write about 200 words describing your last holiday. Think about the tenses you use. Think about how to describe your holiday, how you felt and what you did. Remember to use adjectives and some adverbs if you can.

After you submit your writing, It will be checked and you may be asked to make some corrections are add more description to you writing.

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My last holyday... I went to Amed with four best friends. We were there for 2 days and one night with amazing experience. Amed is one of the best tourism destinations in Bali. Amed has beautiful beach with nice coral so it was beautiful place for snorkeling. When we were there the weather was fine and sunny. We stayed in Amed Villa Beach. It was great, there were two bed rooms with bath room each other, and only 1.5 million for 2 days one night. First day, we arrived there at 2 o’clock in the afternoon. That day we went to the beach for had my first time snorkeling. We particularly me, were very happy saw the cute fish swam around us. Besides that, we could see beautiful coral on the seabed. In that night, we stayed in that villa and sang romantic songs together until middle night and then went to bed. After that day, in the morning we bought some fish and make it grill for our fantastic breakfast. And then we prepare quickly for back to home, because we had to check out at 2’clock, we didn’t want to pay some money for extra time we needed there. it was a nice holyday!

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